Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hardwork and practice can make you successful.discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sport can be considered as one of the most significant part of a student as wel as an adult's life which not only enchants phisical fitness but also develop concentration and aim power. Some individuals believe that in order to become a eminent physical activity person someone should have the ability naturally or by birth. In other hand, remaning folks are having different mind set that is only ene to end practice and endless hard work can bring success. This essay will showcase both views and my opinion.
Let's talk about first concept. Capability to play with the assist of normal adaptiveness can be added advantages for anyone. it is the in-born talent to understand the trick of the game in a small span. Although, somebody has to try dedicatedly to touch the sky of achievement which involes time management skills, abrupt decision making thought process, adoption of growing self confidence level. For example, Sachin Tendulkar is a person with lots of hidden expertise for cricket who became captain due to the organic skillset in himself. In short, inherent versatility marks a person among all.
Now coming to the next idea, noone can deny that practice makes a man perfect. Additional effort leads to the right path of reaching preset goal. it is not always a fact that having immense knowledge from innated from birth regarding trciks & tips can take one to the stage of positive result. As an example, Virat koholi is the captain who is having all additonal innate skills. Inspite of that, he goes for a daiy session to accomplish target. However, inner inborn techniques are insufficient untill and unless someone step-in the way of unstoppable workout.
In conclusion, spartman must be aware of these two facts rather than simply contemplating anyone of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06734006734 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61995233993 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710437710438 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8179789737 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147892477595 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366666777338 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438923581674 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763261675907 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070749850534 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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