People leaving rural areas
Developing number of people not interested living in remote area nowadays are apparently
influenced by several aspects. The aftermath of migration from villages to the urban city can be
considerable problem of depopulation. There are two primary reason why this situation should be
averted.
Firstly, increasing number of population of city increases inequality of economy between developed
cities and developing cities going wider. Economy growth of rural cities tend to plunge due to
minimum of human resources conducting works and jobs there while major city has an increasing
economical growth as there are myriad of resources can be managed. Moreover, manufacture,
health, education and other development of the city are also affected by urbanization. Folks live far
away from main city are complicatedly to find decent health and education services.
Secondly, migration to the city has systemic inhabitant problem where people may live in limited area
owing to rising number of population - land area on the city remain the same whilst people occupied
it keep growing. the subsequent effect are accommodation cost for residency getting more pricey
than before. An expensive rental costs is imminently encountered for people living in the city.
Furthermore, other effect namely road congestion and air pollution are most likely to happen if
government do nothing to overcome these problems.
As the conclusion, limiting people migrating from agrarian village to metropolitan city are less likely
implemented without any solution tackling their aims. The government shall provide the same
development such as proper hospital, advanced junior and senior high school for children, and
adequate employment for villagers by the fact that they are able to get sufficient facilities without
moving to the city 100-miles away.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Influenced
...n remote area nowadays are apparently influenced by several aspects. The aftermath of mi...
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Suggestion: Considerable
...rom villages to the urban city can be considerable problem of depopulation. There are two ...
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Suggestion: Averted
...y reason why this situation should be averted. Firstly, increasing number of popula...
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Suggestion: Cities
...equality of economy between developed cities and developing cities going wider. Econ...
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Suggestion: Economical
...re while major city has an increasing economical growth as there are myriad of resources...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...re while major city has an increasing economical growth as there are myriad of resources...
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Suggestion: Away
...ected by urbanization. Folks live far away from main city are complicatedly to fin...
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Suggestion: It
...emain the same whilst people occupied it keep growing. the subsequent effect are...
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Suggestion: Than
...ost for residency getting more pricey than before. An expensive rental costs is im...
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Suggestion: Then
...ost for residency getting more pricey than before. An expensive rental costs is im...
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Message: “than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ost for residency getting more pricey than before. An expensive rental costs is im...
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Suggestion: Government
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Suggestion: Implemented
... to metropolitan city are less likely implemented without any solution tackling their aim...
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Suggestion: Moving
... to get sufficient facilities without moving to the city 100-miles away.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76618705036 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87087153442 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3380646563 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132887421457 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459481884624 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713829361649 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392692024113 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674223408792 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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