There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas and actions between children, their parents and grandparents. Why do these differences exist? Does it cause problems in your community, in your opinion?
Generation means 12 years where the loop hole appears in culture, food, life style, time management ability according to schedule and decision making power as per the current situation. As a result, this gap leads to numerous mind sets, thinking process or regular activities within family. We often become the witness of the huge understanding difference where grandparents thinking don't match with the young people. This essay will define the possible causes of these unmatched ideas and describe the associate difficulties happening in society through my strong opinion.
It is obvious that we are always trying to follow the most recent trends in order to run with the flow and conception about every aspects of life builds with these ongoing trends. Now problems lies here. People should move on to mix up with the upcoming movement but they don't. So, instead of rebuild individuals thinking or mentality we try to dominate those who are younger than us. So that we can prioritize own standpoints.
However, teenagers will concentrate more their viewpoints rather than on the old one. This is how, they lose their temperament while finding facts behind it. For example, if we dig into last 20 years back, we will get in touch with countless outdated standpoints which was mostly inclines towards women. As per the old age perspective, women are supposed to work within house where as men were liable to work outside work. In short, this is how issues are gradually creating and existing in today's locality.
Let's talk about the vital misunderstanding in your community. Two main problems are growing due to such enormous gap ie. Gender-bias and adjustment. In my opinion, both of these reasons can become an unstoppable chaos among the own family members.
In conclusion, bringing update within oneself improves patience to build healthy environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2119205298 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68963055807 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711920529801 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5046191074 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8421052632 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105641315869 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287388268492 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036216136754 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499004118218 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416028739629 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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