Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are divided in their opinion on how to use extra time effectively. It is considered by some that spending spare time for brain exercises is beneficial, such as reading and playing word puzzles, while others think that it is necessary to relax our mind during leisure time. This essay will discuss both points of view and state my opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that mind games and reading materials could aid us to improve our way of thinking. Doing brain activities during spare time, such as solving crossword puzzles, could help us to build mental toughness and develop reaction time. Another thing to consider is the value of reading books. Research has found that reading is essential because it develops our thoughts, gives us endless knowledge and lessons to read while keeping our minds active. For this reason, it could be important to do these mental exercises during our free time because they benefit people not only for entertainment but also to enhance brain function.
On the other hand, it is essential not to think about anything during our spare time to avoid stress. Moreover, as we are well-rested and stress-free, our health will be saved and function productively in our daily lives. A recent study shows that depression, high blood pressure, and sleep-related disorders are connected to stress and inadequate rest. Therefore, if a disorganized mind is keeping your stress level high, the answer could simply be getting it all out of your head.
In conclusion, both views are appropriate in different circumstances. Engaging in activities during leisure time, such as reading and doing word puzzles, has a useful outcome by enhancing memory and judgment. However, resting the mind is beneficial when eliminating sources of stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, another thing, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14432989691 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70929456496 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6708331299 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427031750565 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12698117994 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972630952485 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267982568671 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105962780684 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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