In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities, some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Urban centres have been known to have a fairer share of distribution of social amenities such as good learning centres and hospitals. Most people believe that educators and health workers should compulsorily work in rural areas for sometime while others believe otherwise citing that everyone has the right to work wherever they choose which i strongly support.
Those who think education and health professionals should spend some years of their career in villages think that this move will enable rural dwellers have a taste of the excellent services city dwellers enjoy. When these workers spend time in rural areas, they will bring their expertise to bear which the villagers would not have been able to access if the workers were in the city. This will lead to a more educated and healthier sub-urban population. For instance, Afuze, a suburb of Benin city has recorded a decrease in death rate since the government made it mandatory for young health and education graduates to spend the first five years of their after school in rural areas.
In a free society however, i believe people have the right to practice their careers wherever they deem fit. Instead of limiting where people can work, the government should make rural areas attractive. They can do this by building state of the art facilities and provide incentives to people willing to relocate and work there. For example, rural areas in Canada have seen influx of professionals because the government provided adequate facilities for its dwellers including free medical and learning coverage.
In conclusion, though some opine that health and education workers should be made to work in rural areas so its dwellers can benefit from their knowledge, I support others who believe that people have the right to practice their chosen career wherever they want. if the authorities made rural areas attractive, people will voluntarily migrate their to work and stay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14603174603 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49485436688 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51746031746 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2265975758 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.083333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277920324736 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110716890607 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753587502618 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185188400105 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492216189839 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.