You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Smith,
The purpose of this letter is to bring in to your kind attention that recently we rented your apartment no. 13 Tiger building. However, My name is John Moses. Recently, I moved into this apartment accompanying my family. I work as a software engineer at Gaditek Associates. Besides, I would like to discuss concerns with the furniture condition.
Concerning damage furniture, the dining table is uneven and wobbly. Also, the chair is missing from the dining table. Furthermore, the cabinet in the kitchen has broken locks and cabinets remains open. Finally, rusty scratches found on the wooden floor inside the kitchen and visible to everyone.
Moreover, I would like your visit for inspection of damaged furniture and households. In addition to this, I want all the damaged furniture repaired or replaced by the new ones.
I hope to hear from you soon about my concerns.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, however, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23841059603 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6903560873 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708609271523 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2633389133 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7857142857 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149980701315 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413287117468 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595439248878 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665434956496 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436129396772 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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