Childrens should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: done
...me people say that students should have do part time jobs with their studies . In ...
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Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
...people say that students should have do part time jobs with their studies . In this way t...
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...ave do part time jobs with their studies . In this way they get working experience...
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...d money which is useful for their future . Whereas some masses advocate that pupil...
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...oney which is useful for their future . Whereas some masses advocate that pupils merely...
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...pils merely concentrate on their studies . But I contended that a children perform...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...on their studies . But I contended that a children perform well if he or she doing both th...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...at a children perform well if he or she doing both things . Merits and demerits relat...
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...form well if he or she doing both things . Merits and demerits relating to both gi...
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...my own perspective. On the one hand , learners have to work in their leisure ...
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...ners have to work in their leisure hours . Pupil get experience of working environ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
...nvironment in advance if they are doing part time job side by side studies . After comple...
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...doing part time job side by side studies . After completion of studies they easily...
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...get a better job if they have experience . But it has also few disadvantage , stu...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few disadvantages'.
Suggestion: few disadvantages
... they have experience . But it has also few disadvantage , students in their early stage start w...
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...ey have experience . But it has also few disadvantage , students in their early s...
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...ence . But it has also few disadvantage , students in their early stage start wor...
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...tly they drop it without completing them . On the other hand , some masses b...
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...ompleting them . On the other hand , some masses believed that learners shou...
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...ers should only focus on their education . childrens do Studies with more focus an...
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... should only focus on their education . childrens do Studies with more focus and Concentr...
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...ts later become professional and experts . It has some drawbacks , after completio...
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...onal and experts . It has some drawbacks , after completion of education studies t...
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...ies they have to do more efforts to get a average level job . Because lack of exp...
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... more efforts to get a average level job . Because lack of experience no one ready...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re efforts to get a average level job . Because lack of experience no one ready to pay ...
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...h wages to fresher. To recapitulate , I contended that a children grow well i...
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Line 13, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
... To recapitulate , I contended that a children grow well if he have good educational b...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ntended that a children grow well if he have good educational background with workin...
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...ional background with working experience . Its also great when they are work in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15918367347 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78516134375 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567346938776 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8149212194 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324221387016 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114332823691 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824203892417 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205203480856 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616818667388 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.