At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, youngsters play a crucial role in the growth of nations that is why in today’s times, many regions takes a vast amount of young one populace as compare with this senior citizens. The reason is that young adults are essential for progress of countries and explore new techniques. However, the pros of this problem overshadow the cons.
The main bright side of this situation is that youngsters are future of regions and necessary for country’s development that is why some nations includes a relatively huge number of young adults population. Moreover, the young people are strong, physical fit and more energetic to protect their regions from the clutches of enemies. In addition to this, they take part in various streams like sports,entertainment and so on where they can achieve success, name and fame and also collect huge respect for countries. For example, Virat Kohli captain of Indian cricket team get a lots of name, fame and respect in sport field for him as well as his region.
The another major benefit of this notion is that young adults are helpful to introduce new methods for business and technologies. Furthermore, youngsters give their efforts to reach their company at with the aid of using new tricks. Apart from this, the invent majority of experiments in science fields to explore latest technologies as well as improveing the science stream. In other words, young adults who are engineers,architecture and etcetera are producing a latest machines, new design buildings, flexible roads and so on which are advance and helpful to rise nation’s economy. For instance, burz Khalifa is the better example of young adults architectures in Dubai.
Nevertheless, this situation has also dark side because older people are mandatory for countries the reason is that they preserve the culture, history and other aspects for upcoming generations. Moreover, some senior citizens are helpful in the growth of businesses because their old methods are also useful due to this tricks they gained lots of progress in their past days. Moving further, old masses also crucial parts of sports and cinemas. For example, Amita Bachan a great start of Indian Bollywood become older as well as countine his acting and Malkit Singh at age of 90 is winning first prize in 100 meters running race.
In conclusion, although, senior citizens have many benefits in region’s populace but young adults are more useful for nations that is why many countries include a relatively large amount of youngsters population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , entertainment
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ohli captain of Indian cricket team get a lots of name, fame and respect in sport fiel...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun name seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of names'.
Suggestion: lots of names
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'explore the latest'.
Suggestion: explore the latest
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19708029197 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87594946065 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523114355231 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3830852838 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.647058824 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173542252852 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563226002 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537589302404 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101954145422 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192921766655 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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