To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Major cities are often packed with people from many different backgrounds, so it is safe to assume that useful insights can be gained by studying the characteristics of people living in these cities. However, the characteristics of people living in urban and rural are hardly similar, and so major cities may not be representative for the entire society. Based on the context of a characteristic and society, the argument may be justified or not.
First of all, the term “most important characteristic” is vague in this context, since what people can experience in major cities is definitely different than in rural areas. In fact, some characteristics are much more prevalent and may be considered important in these areas. For instance, it is much more common to see young people respect the elderly in outer suburbs. This is hard to be seen in major cities, since the hard circumstances there force people as an individual rather than a member of a community. If social behaviour is an integral characteristic of a society, then major cities cannot clearly depict the characteristics of a society, unless the objective is changed to understand the society only living in cities.
Secondly, the scope of the society in this context is not demonstrated clearly. It is not apparent whether the society is of the people in the entire province, island or even country. The bigger the scope, the less representative the people in the major cities are. It is become more noticeable if the scope is a country, because people living in isolated villages obviously have no access to major cities and therefore may hardly be included as a part of society if major cities are assumed to be representative for the country. Consequently, perfect generalization of the characteristics of a society in a country is hardly attainable, since even adjacent cities may have polar opposite characteristic.
To sum it up, major cities provide only the overview but not a complete picture of a society. In depth understanding of a society requires thorough investigations and observations to not only the cities, but also the rural regions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ities are often packed with people from many different backgrounds, so it is safe to assume th...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...in major cities is definitely different than in rural areas. In fact, some character...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25565880978 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6514613 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.933333333 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23926839259 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870548691638 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673294239337 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159992563335 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712698058939 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.