Children should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies . What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so ?
Some people advocate that students should have do part time job with their studies . In this way they get working experience and money which is useful for their future . merits and demerits relating to give topic will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective .
On the one hand , education is expensive and lots of students decide to work for part time in their leisure hours . In such a way they save up money before they begin their University studies . This allows them to pay for their costs , tuition fees and accommodation rather than struggle financially . The times recently reported that the average student at a UK universities requires over $12000 per annum just to survive and many drop out because they cannot afford to stay their . Moreover , learners on advance get the experience of working conditions and learn communication skills . Pupils achieve Working experience which is further useful for earn better job and high wages .
Despite these advantages , many students often get used to working and don't want to continue to studying after experiencing working life. This Short term view can cause some to children go straight into a job that is beneath their capabilities or may not offer the same prospects to their future career . For instance a recent survey by the British government found that 26% of pupils who take part time job along with their studies lose their concentration from studies and never enter tertiary education .
In conclusion , taking part time job can be advantageous if it allows people to gather up savings , however they should also be careful that it doesn't lead to disillusionment with education altogether.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1204379562 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70239903094 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0098378728 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348953927893 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11975546713 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984329555418 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219994158197 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032474026617 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.