It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The industrial revolution started a new era of both industrialization and new technologies developing that over the years led to an inevitable lost of traditional cultures. Today’s technologies in some fields have fully replaced the traditional cultures and for this reason many people think that those two are incompatible.
over the last 60 years almost all sectors have been interested by an increase in technologies using, this phenomena has been labelled as “authomation”. this was mainly due to an increase in demand as a consequence of healthy spread. technologies development allowed society and cultural progress and led till the nowadays phenomena called “globalization”. An example of how technologies make a progress in the society health is crops cultivation where machine has been replaced by the one used by hand. The machine use led to an increase in crops production as well as a cost cultivation reduction.
On the other end there are sectors where traditional cultures remain the backbone of our society and can only be enhanced by using machine but can not be totally replaced by using technologies. An example is the use of herbals as medicine instead of chemical synthesis drug. A proof of this is that the use of traditional medicines is growing due to the resistance increase towards drug made by chemical path.
I can close that the new technologies have their row in the traditional cultures so, in some cases, we can consider the new technologies as development of the most of traditional habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25702811245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58440428318 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1441372508 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224943579657 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880257699856 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662559295847 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155725308548 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619078767177 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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