Cars have made a greater impact on society than airplanes.
Some people think cars have powerful impacts on society than airplanes since the introduction of cars change people’s life tremendously. However, in my opinion, it is airplanes that have made a great impact on society for several reasons.
Why people think a greater impact has been made by cars? Before the cars came to the worlds, people had to travel with cars or wagons. This inconvenient methods to travel let people stay in their own regions limiting experiences with unfamiliar countries or cities. But, I strongly believe that after introducing airplanes to the worlds cut more limitations of time and spaces compared to traveling with cars.
To begin with, airplanes simply shorten the travel time compared to traveling by cars. Assume that you have to go on a business trip from Philadelphia to New York, would you drive? I am sure that it is much easier for you to take the plane which provides you a shorter journey. Moreover, you can take a rest and sleep while in flight because you don’t have to make the airplane move as the pilots will do it instead of you.
On top of that, no places cannot go with airplanes. Even from Africa to Asia, people make a journey by transferring airplanes. Even though it is not directly connected by airplanes, people can travel anyways. However, there are not enough roads to left for this long-distance travel. With cars, it is impossible to across the ocean.
To sum up, I admit cars are the frontiers that brought innovations on transportation system. However, considering the airplane is a lot more comfortable in longer journeys since its shorter travel time and no limit of places to go.
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...urneys since its shorter travel time and no limit of places to go.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93971631206 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74645790695 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5067999274 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9411764706 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249629594366 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799573337119 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108039372516 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138238736855 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13325702067 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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