Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Conservation of environment is a common issue in today’s society. Both, the Governments and individuals put responsibility on each other’s shoulders, rather contribute their own part. It is widely believed that reversal of climatic destruction is the responsibility of the state along with giant industries, instead of blaming the common people. I strongly disagreed with this point of view, as I believed that individual’s efforts with government can bring significant positive changes, while persuading the governments and large companies to take protective measures.
First of all, individuals can repair the environmental impairments working together as a community. This is because the effects of many small efforts quickly add up. For example, in the cities if once a week every person chose public transport rather using their private car, reduction of air pollution would be at great level. Moreover, cleaning of houses and neighbor is equally important. It is public obligation to dump the waste material in appropriate places and try to reduce the level of litter. However, it is true that action of single person cannot bring significant differences; many individuals taking the same action could bring a dramatic environmental change.
Furthermore, the action of so many people can also influence government and corporations, due to the fact that people have power as both community and consumer. Public voice would have a great impact on huge companies and authorities. For instance, they can organize social media campaign to boycott certain products such as plastic industry, packaging food etc. There is no question that government and the large companies play role in protecting the natural environment. The environmentalists can raise their voice and draw the attention of authorities if they can see any company is dumping its waste material in water bodies. This public pressure enables the government to take serious actions against such companies.
To conclude, although government and corporations should actively participate to rehabilitate the environment, yet individual efforts cannot be ignored. The communities could bring positive changes to improve the climatic damages as every person in society should take part in this matter to have safe and green land.
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- Many sports players advertise sports-related products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... companies to take protective measures. First of all, individuals can repair the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.85567010309 441% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 937.175257732 210% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 351.0 206.0 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59829059829 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13816079597 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 127.690721649 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 290.88556701 210% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1981020206 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 4.34317383033 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195103940442 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565669469448 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520334783422 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117239872014 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319237356908 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 8.71597938144 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 41.2886597938 249% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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