The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in cloths and other consumer goods. do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, copious variety of contexts are available in the market as compared to few decades ago owing to flexibility in business. Some people says that use of goods among the society is similar because of the masses who copy one to another.However, I think the sameness of products in people is not due to copying other people, but factors, such as current trend, brand, quality and so on also played a crucial role while choice of particular item.This essay tends to analyze the view before reasons conclusion drawn.
To begin with, public has started to buying common products because of reliance on the brand of the item.
The users of the company has believed, the goods are well in quality, durability and performance. For example, the most users of the i-phone are satisfied with the services and function that offers because of that people are more insisting to buy that product rather then copying other people. Thus it is crystal clear that the performance of the products much more depend on area of choice.
In addition to this, the cloths choose by the people are same due to plenty reasons, such as weather condition, unique market item, traditional issue and so on. With regards to winter and the masses who live in cold zone, people are wearing cloths that provide them to feel warm environmental condition. Therefore, it would not be the case of following other people but the environment situation make them in compulsion to wear similar cloths.
To sum up, I reiterate my opinion, the similarity in product that people use owing to quality and performance, not because of copying other natives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96750902527 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62404963002 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0543027852 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.6 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890541442339 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323256897819 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297708163805 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466896027916 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255748783389 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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