The number of older people is increasing in many parts of the world what are the effects of this on society as a whole? What are the advantages or disadvantage of this trend?
There is no iota of doubt that counting of grey-haired people is escalating. This phenomenon is offering manifold benefits to society; however, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to the same. The following paragraphs would cast light on the pros and cons of this trend.
To begin with the bright side, older persons are the torchbearers who play an interactive role in building the successful career of youth. Therefore, the first and the foremost benefit can be considered; the older ones can guide teenagers - who lead astray from the moral path - by imparting the astonishing illustrations from their survival path. Apart from this, the elder ones not only have knowledge about culture, religion as well as a tradition but also have experienced to preserve relationships between family members and experience; how to save money. Therefore, they can become a good leader of society as well as the country. To justify, The prime minister of India ‘ Manmohan Singh’ ( age 70) had tackled the problem of finance in his period of service time, when the country is reeling under the adverse situation of economic. As a consequence, older ones are the backbone of our society.
On the flip side of the coin, there are some nasty consequences as well. Firstly, the health of aging persons is decreasing day by day. Due to the government’s new rule(in 2010, India) of curbing the pension of retired persons, there is no earning resource for themselves. Additionally, for a healthy diet and medicine ( routine checkup) they need money; whereas, if there is merely one earning hand in the family, then how could complete all the expenses. Consequently, such style of living, impose a burden on the family, as well as, in term of looking after elders, needs much time of youngsters; which creates the problem between families and such trend resort to reduce affection and bond among them.
To recapitulate, with the given aforementioned plausible arguments, it is abduntaly clear that merits outnumber the demerits; however, efforts should be made to minimize the latter one because without the support of older persons, to survive within society would become difficult especially for juveniles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1843575419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85286838545 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0117027907 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.733333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945631049428 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313792736036 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323751426736 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613407447036 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448354016959 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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