Overpopulation. Problems and Solutions
The excessive increase of the population is becoming a real hassle not only in developing countries but also in the developed ones for the past few decade. this essay will delineate some problem resulted in overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
The first thing to mention, as one of the major problem, is the widespread famine. The population booming has overcame the ability to supply food and, consequently, poverty who cannot afford to buy will starve to death. Moreover, it also brings the depreciation of fresh water, the loss of habitat and biodiversity. Secondly, the overpopulation is the underlying reason of the unemployment. In the overpopulation nations, the available occupations are fewer than the overall job-seeking population.It leads to the rise in crime rate, violence and the dispirited quality of life.
There are two possible remedies for this acute puzzle. The first one is to raise awareness about controlled birth through campaigning both in life and on the internet. The other solution is to put in place policies restricting population growth. The government should impose high taxes on families with more than two children and even fine them if needed.
To sum up, overpopulation brings the starvation and the rise in crime rate and joblessness and should be prevented through campaigns and laws
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decades'.
Suggestion: few decades
...also in the developed ones for the past few decade. this essay will delineate some problem...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...developed ones for the past few decade. this essay will delineate some problem resul...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'overcome'.
Suggestion: overcome
...read famine. The population booming has overcame the ability to supply food and, consequ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...than the overall job-seeking population.It leads to the rise in crime rate, violen...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...policies restricting population growth. The government should impose high taxes on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34579439252 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.066150614 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2455988302 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075412494726 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229994615363 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489670979206 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.036814596666 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219237514067 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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