Describe problems connected with overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
The excessive increase of the population is becoming a real hassle not only in developing countries but also in the developed ones for the past few decades. This essay will delineate some problem resulted in overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
The first thing to mention, as one of the major problem, is the widespread famine. The population booming has overcome the ability to supply food and, consequently, poverty who cannot afford to buy will starve to death. Moreover, it also brings the depreciation of fresh water, the loss of habitat and biodiversity. Secondly, the overpopulation is the underlying reason of the unemployment. In the overpopulation nations, the available occupations are fewer than the overall job-seeking population. It leads to the rise in crime rate, violence and the dispirited quality of life.
There are two possible remedies for this acute puzzle. The first one is to raise awareness about controlled birth through campaigning both in real life and on the internet. The other solution is to put in place policies restricting population growth. The government should impose high taxes on families with more than two children and even fine them if needed.
To sum up, overpopulation brings the starvation and the rise in crime rate and joblessness and should be prevented through campaigns and laws
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...policies restricting population growth. The government should impose high taxes on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30555555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04391722929 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6330048701 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202937571288 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570793154019 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104021949027 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111557126426 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946963521689 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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