One way to solve the problem of congestion on the roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles. How could this alleviate congestion? What other measures cab you suggest to deal with the problem of congestion in cities.
The number of privately owned vehicles on roads can be bridled by imposing more taxes to tackle the issue of pollution in the surroundings. It would be, therefore, certainly beneficial in reducing the motor vehicles , and consequent reduction in smokes and gases; however, various awareness campaigns arranged by appropriate authorities would be an another effective remedial measure. This essay will discuss about both these aspects in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, a high amount of taxes would result in less number of such machines on roads, which would eventually affect the cleanliness in atmosphere in a positive manner. As this financial burden on the pockets of citizenry would certainly affect the savings mechanism, the declining trend in owing these mode of conveyances can be witnessed. To exemplify, a report produced by the ABP news in 2018 suggested that in many of Arab states, a colossal number of citizens started utilising the public transport after the governmental decision to increase the tariff rates. Hence, it would be an imperative step to save the environment from deteriorating.
Furthermore, numerous campaigns planned by the supreme authorities would be a pivotal step in dealing with this detrimental phenomenon. More precisely, the knowledge of its harmful impacts on human health must be conveyed, and resultantly, every individual would realise his responsibility towards saving the nation and other human beings. To illustrate, a recent research conducted in Britain revealed that a substantial proportion of working professionals sold their cars after being aware about its deleterious effects on environment. Thus, this activity can be proved as an investment in saving the nation’s health.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that although more increase in the amount of taxes would be a judicial approach, numerous displays about the disastrous outcomes of driving such vehicles would be putting more emphasis on this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...eneficial in reducing the motor vehicles , and consequent reduction in smokes and ...
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an effective' or 'another effective'.
Suggestion: an effective; another effective
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ly affect the cleanliness in atmosphere in a positive manner. As this financial burden on the pocket...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'savings'' or 'saving's'?
Suggestion: savings'; saving's
...of citizenry would certainly affect the savings mechanism, the declining trend in owing...
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Message: Did you mean 'this mode' or 'these modes'?
Suggestion: this mode; these modes
...mechanism, the declining trend in owing these mode of conveyances can be witnessed. To exe...
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... it can be reiterated that although more increase in the amount of taxes would be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55048859935 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08262422349 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.776058628 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638625846907 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279808736635 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240017452544 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043492928342 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00343812537194 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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