Write a letter to your friend, who is visiting a city that you are familiar with.
In your letter, you should:
• describe to him the place worth visiting
• tell eating options
• suggest transport options.
Dear Priya,
Hope you are doing fine. Firstly, let me apologies for not keeping in touch. In my last letter I had written that I was in middle of shifting apartments. Happy to share, that I finally have settled down in my new apartment.
I met Frank last week, and he happened to tell me that you are planning a vacation to London in July. I have visited London last year in June for leisure and had a wonderful time with my friends. Hence, I am certain that you will have a great time as well.
Since this is your 1st visit, I would like to share my experience i.e. famous places for sightseeing, restaurants where you can relish local food, shopping places and so on.For sightseeing, there are tour buses called as Red Bus which takes you on the city tour and halts at all the famous architecture places like London Bridge, Big Ben so on. To enjoy local food, please visit restaurants located at Hill street. There you can try plethora of local delicacies. Be careful, as food is a bit spicy and you don’t want fall sick on your trip. Last but not the least for shopping you should visit Palladium mall situated at Five Square street. In this mall, you will find all international and local brands outlet. However, I would suggest that you should shop from street fairs as shopping in mall will be quite expensive.
The transport facility in London is top notch. You can either travel in buses or trains. Please locate a nearest subway station and buy a full day travel ticket. This ticket will cost you 20 pounds and you can use it for both train and bus travel. Additionally, please do not forget to pack an umbrella with you, as London’s weather is very unpredictable and you might encounter few rainy days.
Hope you have an amazing trip and do let me know if you need any more information.
Lots of love
Minal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...h local food, shopping places and so on.For sightseeing, there are tour buses calle...
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Line 7, column 703, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brands'' or 'brand's'?
Suggestion: brands'; brand's
...u will find all international and local brands outlet. However, I would suggest that y...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
.... The transport facility in London is top notch. You can either travel in buses or trai...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ravel in buses or trains. Please locate a nearest subway station and buy a full d...
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Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more information. Lots of love Minal
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 937.175257732 162% => OK
No of words: 333.0 206.0 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54954954955 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44391683292 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 127.690721649 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2116328 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1428571429 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251360801816 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678359144605 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404530250782 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121503368333 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047576600656 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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