Write a letter to your local Council that the street you are living has become dirty lately. in your letter you should tell
why it is happening
what problems it will cause
what your suggestions are
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention on the pathetic condition of the street 2B, Park Avenue.
Actually, the sweepers of the area on strike since last 2 weeks. Owing to which piles of garbage can be seen all around the road,and it has become a challenging task to pass through here. Moreover, many stray dogs have started living in the street due to garbage. they throw litter here and there, sometimes they even come inside our homes.
It would have detrimental affects on the health of inhabitants because countless mosquitoes have started which in turn would cause ailments such as malaria, dengue. If heaps of waste will continue to grow no one would be able to come out of one's home due to awful smell.
I would like to request you to not only identify the cause of protest by the workers but also take strict actions on creating inconvenience for all the locality members. Apart from this, it would be grateful if street will be cleaned at the earliest.
I hope you will address this concern as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your im...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... garbage can be seen all around the road,and it has become a challenging task to pas...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ed living in the street due to garbage. they throw litter here and there, sometimes ...
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Line 13, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cause ailments such as malaria, dengue. If heaps of waste will continue to grow no...
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Line 13, column 242, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...row no one would be able to come out of ones home due to awful smell. I would l...
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Line 17, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Apart from this, it would be grateful if street will be cleaned at the earliest. ...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Maria Roy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85863874346 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4422049488 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701570680628 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8834669253 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170159666658 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059223710574 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545490056765 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087963422973 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577547215358 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.