The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person in an Australian university
The two plans compare the layout and price of a student room for two people and one for one person at an Australian university.
Overall, it is clear that the room for two people is slightly wider and equipped with more furniture. However, the price per student of the room for two is less than that of a single room.
At 200 dollars per week, a student gets to live in a 6x3.5 square-meter room. The bathroom is located at the top left corner and opposite the kitchen appliances, which include a microwave, a stove and a sink. There is a study desk situated to the right of the bathroom and a bed in the right corner with a window view. The student can also watch the TV opposite the study desk.
At 350 dollars per week, two students can share the space of a room 6 meters in length and 4 meters in width. The arrangement of furniture in this room is relatively similar to the room for one person, as seen in the position of the bathroom, one study desk and one bed. Kitchen appliances are arranged along the shorter side of the room, next to the entrance to give space to a table and chairs at the center of the room, a TV and another study desk. Another bed is also added to the bottom right corner, and separated from the other bed by a cupboard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31380753138 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3338505572 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47280334728 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7783245086 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446616022388 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182221270706 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183841207371 0.0843802449381 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347883855909 0.15604864568 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197929113905 0.0819641961636 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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