What is the difference between traditional food and fast food?
People is becoming more and more hectic nowadays and they need to bring down the mealtimes. As a result, fast food has emerged as a new alternative to the traditional one. This essay will discuss the differences between these types of eating
First thing to mention as one of the basic divergence is in the way they are prepared. There is indisputable that junk food is much more faster than the classic cuisine. Diners just need to wait a few minutes instead of hours to enjoy the meal. The pace thanks to the preprocessed ingredients and modern cooking machines.
Secondly, there is variation in nutritional value. The traditional food brings a balanced diet encompassed all nutrients a person requires while snack food, by contrast, is based on meat and contained high level of calories, salts, fat and artificial sweeteners. For that reason, fast food is responsible for causing obesity, diabetes and other cardiovascular diseases.Therefore, with the health-related problems caused, fast food should not be regarded as the main dish in the society
Last but not least is the spiritual values that these two types bring. The short-ordered food is suitable for the person who always up to the ears but the consequence is that there is no time for family meals. Traditional food, in the other hand, offers the opportunity to gather with family. Moreover it also brings the members together through mealtime conversations
In conclusion, junk food and the traditional food have the discrepancy in how they ready, the amount of nutrition and the spiritual values they bring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... the opportunity to gather with family. Moreover it also brings the members together thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16602316602 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96375243666 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8214077357 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382779996441 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119385023564 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102773667019 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200219539576 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827899821987 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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