Ensuring that children should have regular physical exercises is the duty of both parents and teachers . some people believe that taking part in sports activities at school is a waste of time . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Sports are an cardinal part and parcel of our life and making them a habit brings positive changes in our life . It is expected that parents should promote sports among children at home and education institutions drop off sports from their curriculum . I totally disagree with this opinion .
Pupils spend majority of time under supervision of their mentors and they pick up sports skills comfortably under the able guidance of their teachers .To illustrate , my brother learnt yoga at school and he is a perfect yoga trainer in his profession , turning the life people from stress to motivation . Such develop cognitive skills and problem solving skills consequently students are able to confront hard situations and to make right decisions either as an individual or as a team .
Besides , sports strength their internal and external abilities and removes inferiority complex from children . For example , I used to play badminton in my school and used to examine the position of the opponent and learned striking skills quickly . That enhance my mental ability by leaps and bounce progressing very fast .
To recapitulate, a develop nation requires youngsters to build their all-round personality and only sports can indulge such qualities among the youth .
- " Prevention is better than cure ". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be Bette to invest in preventive measures . To what extent do you agree . 56
- Nowdays ,many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children centers provide the best care . Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Should Government spend more money in improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation ? why ? Give reasons for your answers. 56
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. 61
- Government should educate children about their health right from school by introducing subject like health . Do you agree with this ? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34673366834 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77546143682 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678391959799 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8343572911 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132686997359 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049498479867 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464801104487 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720235064327 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462400017346 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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