Tpo23-people believe that it would be better to work quickly and carelessly
In the present fast paced world people need to move fast to keep up with the latest developments. However, some people work in a slow but effective manner others do everything rapidly commiting mistakes. I totally agree that performing any kind of tasks need to be done carefully without any errors. this essay intends to argue in favour of my viewpoint.
Admittedly, apart from bringing forth the big achievements to the world rapidly, doing work that are error free will result in less time and resource waste. For instance, the introduction of fully automatic electronic car is yet to happen in the world. this cannot be brought in a fast manner because these vehicles should not cause any harm to the public and be energy efficient. Likewise, it is a huge amount of responsibility for the car making industry because any minor wrong move can result in total destruction of plan. Therefore, it is important to carry out anything accurately and slowly.
Secondly, it will not only be profitable if projects or assignments are completed with no mistakes but also ensures their credibility. For example, be it a company or an employer lesser the flaws the more success their venture would be. As the proverb goes, slow and steady wins the race ,consistent and slow progression will raise a company's stock value and the investments. this will have a profound effect on the growth and expansion of company.
Furthermore, slow and efficient work can lift the amount of stress on the shoulders of their members involved in it. To illustrate, if I am planning to organise a big fundraising program I need to plan meticulously in deciding people to take care of each piece of work. Moreover, I need to start the work from day one slowly to be ready on the final day of the program. As the work begins the difficulties associated with them will be analysed and the ways to rectify them too. All these steps cannot be done if done quickly.
To conclude, I agree that any kind of work needs to be done successfully without any mistakes. This will ensure more profitability as well as the credibility among the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8602739726 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77398308809 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567123287671 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1736225866 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175981484385 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495094531581 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439396290948 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982608757218 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359277532398 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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