In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not to build homes there. What is your opinion?
In this current contemporary era, the demand for new houses is inclining with a great pace because of dense population due to which a very little land is available in the countryside. Some people opine that it is better for property dwellers to build new homes in the countryside while others believe that protection of such remote areas is more prominent as compared to the construction of new residence. However, in my opinion, new homes should not be constructed in the countryside due to the mentioned reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.
there are many reasons why establishment of new premises should not be done in the great outdoors. Firstly, construction in the remote areas will affect the habitats of several species of flora and fauna making it difficult for them to survive as these regions are the main source for shelter and food. Furthermore, this action will push the species towards the line of extinction. Foe instance, there were a plethora of different varieties of animals and plants which could be seen outside the city in rural areas, but due to urbanisation, hose species are now seen nowhere. Moreover, the extinction of species will unbalance the food chain in the environment. Thus, the construction of new buildings in remote areas will disturb the living of many endangered species.
Secondly, the movement of masses outside the cities to remote areas will proliferate the air pollution as people will have to use their vehicles for travelling to the city. For examples, a survey was conducted by environmental commission which yielded a result that urban areas are more polluted than its outdoors due to excessive usage of vehicles. that is why, movement of people and buildings in the countryside will give rise to air pollution.
In conclusion, man's need for new homes can be fulfilled by the construction of premises inside the city, without disturbing the environment and habitats of species as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.078125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89244706088 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5248922631 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243084548557 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085676288372 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837436784426 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148500896885 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963474298927 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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