Incidence of X disease in Someland
The graph gives information about the number of people catching x-disease in someland over a 10-year period From 1983-1992.
Overall, the proportion of infected people during 1983-85 remaind stable. despite of an increase trend during 1986-87,a decrease was seen in 1988. After a fluctuation, the number of those suffering from this disease dropped swiftly.
Between 1983 and 85, the proportion of individuals getting disease in remained stable at 100. despite of some upward trend during 1985-87,this figure reduced to same level of the beginning year.
In 1989,the situation in some land regarding x-disease became worse, with the number of patients reaching it's peak at 400. A gradual decrease was seen during 1989-91 before dropping quickly to zero at the final year of graph.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54471544715 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60548494295 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 184.5 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1861038983 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.25 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135811046187 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581604678365 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647637114444 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898589397219 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546136680863 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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