Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree?
In the present time, the number of people who prefer to consume alternative kinds of medicine is increasing, but some still dispute its effectiveness and safety. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this argument.
Alternative kinds of medicine are a healthy way of training the body to combat illness and infection. While it is still questionable to those who do not believe in this scheme of rehabilitating the body, I am a substantial follower that the body can recuperate on its own and sickness is a consequence of nutritional abundance and inadequacy, and disproportion in lifestyle. Through complementary measures such as vitamin supplementation, herbal medicine, chiropractic therapy, and acupuncture, it empowers the human body to regenerate healthy cells, thus, sustaining the equilibrium of the human body. For instance, the constant practice of meditation, yoga and a vegan regime for both healthy and unhealthy individuals in some countries, resulted in longevity.
Furthermore, another reason why the practice of alternative medicine's evidence and effectiveness is being interrogated is that people only resort to these methods to heal infirmity. The custom of following these practices takes time to effect since restoring wellness does not take overnight. For instance, a person diagnosed with cancer, who has been smoking and eating fast foods all his life, is not going to respond to this kind of therapy; instead of receiving the expected outcome, it might pose a hazard to his health because his body is not accustomed to these practices and nutrition.
In conclusion, alternative medicine is more beneficial to the overall health and wellness of the human body. In my opinion, I completely do not agree with the debate that it is ineffective and is dangerous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39716312057 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21765671298 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1821524057 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835464282394 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345072088592 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349782216451 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541075253396 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030622293376 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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