Nowadays, people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others think that face to face interaction is essential.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, it is considered appropriate to have online friendships by using various social media platforms and group chat applications, while some opine that physical interaction is mandatory. In my opinion, I believe that making friends through social networks is much easier and time-saving option.
On the one hand, connecting to people online with the aid of numerous social networking websites such as Facebook, Twitter, Orkut and chatting applications like whats app and Skype is convenient and simple. To do so, one has to create an account on these websites or applications by filling some basic details, and after that, he or she can simply explore the people of his or her interest. What is more, this method saves a lot of time and money. In other words, there is no need to spend time travelling to a particular place in a meeting with new people.
On the other hand, it is considered essential to have face to face interaction to acquaint each other better. There are chances that people could conceal their identities online, and do fraud with the innocent ones. In order to avoid such instances, personal interaction important. Recently, my friend made a female friend on Facebook, and he shared his debit card details with her without knowing much about her. After two days, he came to know that all of his money from that bank account was being stolen by someone illegally. Thus, one has to be extra cautious about such incidents before making online friends.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that online friendly conversations may lead to some serious risks, however, it can be prevented by confirming the exact identity of the person on the other side. Therefore, I would prefer social networking applications to have chatting and friendship with strange people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...r, Orkut and chatting applications like whats app and Skype is convenient and simple....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09427609428 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72288377778 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8612803051 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217241194958 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695974143136 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513312156475 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129349750077 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251965017812 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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