People wants to own popular clothes , cars and other item .What are the reason behind this . its a positive change or negative change .

Grammar and spelling errors:
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this era of globalisation and modernization ...
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...s era of globalisation and modernization , masses give preference to purchase bran...
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...e preference to purchase branded dresses , automobiles and other anyother products...
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... automobiles and other anyother products .change is the law of nature and every ch...
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...ry change brings with some pros and cons .I utterly believe its a negative change...
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... change brings with some pros and cons .I utterly believe its a negative change ...
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...h some pros and cons .I utterly believe its a negative change and development . Re...
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...d cons .I utterly believe its a negative change and development . Reasons behind ...
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...e its a negative change and development . Reasons behind this change would be dis...
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... in the subsequent sections of the essay . To commence with , individual give...
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...ons of the essay . To commence with , individual give preference to purchase ...
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...e preference to purchase eminent clothes ,footwear and vehicle and other things . ...
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...s ,footwear and vehicle and other things . people expenditure on these because of ...
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...footwear and vehicle and other things . people expenditure on these because of availab...
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...cause of availability of online shopping , humans purchase product from any countr...
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...ct from any country via phone and laptop . To exemplify , my college bought Nike s...
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...ntry via phone and laptop . To exemplify , my college bought Nike shoes from Londo...
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...hoes from London through online shopping . They face huge financial burden on them...
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... They face huge financial burden on them . On the other hand , humans go far ...
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... burden on them . On the other hand , humans go far from their tradition . Th...
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...and , humans go far from their tradition . They forget their values . people feel ...
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...eir tradition . They forget their values . people feel equality in society and it ...
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... tradition . They forget their values . people feel equality in society and it enhance...
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... people feel equality in society and it enhance their confidence after wear branded clo...
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...ir confidence after wear branded clothes . To illustrate , a statics recently cond...
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...ter wear branded clothes . To illustrate , a statics recently conducted indicate t...
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...statics recently conducted indicate that , 80 ℅ people from nations go to other co...
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...eople from nations go to other countries . Most of Indians go to foreign countries...
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... give preference to wear western clothes . They feel comfortable and it helps to f...
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...ps to familiar with cosmopolitan culture . To recapitulate, I firmly believe ...
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...othes and their tradition values reduced .people needs to avoide that .
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...ues reduced .people needs to avoide that .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58937198068 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84774119016 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.2169329489 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239461330496 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692155205416 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772043215994 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137779033995 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103316987224 0.056905535591 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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