You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
– Explain the problem
– Say why the documents are important
– Suggest a solution
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is to inform you that I attended a business conference on 1st September at your renowned hotel. Mistakenly, I forgot some of my important documents in room 102, in which I stayed for that day. I am writing this to ask you for the favour of searching for them and sending them to my place.
On the day of departure that is 2nd September, I had to board an early morning flight to Delhi. As far as I remember, I was editing the papers and compiled them in a black folder which has my name engraved on it. In the hassle of catching the flight, I left my files on the study table. These documents are quintessential as it contains all my research work which I had done for my upcoming project. Unfortunately, I do not have any copy of that material and I have a final presentation with the client on coming Monday.
Therefore, I would request you to ask your hotel staff to search for the files and hold them in your possession. Also, I urge you to courier the belongings to my address which I had mentioned in the hotel's entry register. I am ready to pay the expenses.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Prabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
...my address which I had mentioned in the hotels entry register. I am ready to pay the e...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45161290323 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65903010131 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1898631989 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3076923077 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245556601852 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811775688938 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770788051521 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161962867663 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821578180261 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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