There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Since 17th century human being have seen a lot of development, which has major impact on mankind. Wheel and internate, both of them contributed to growth and modernization. We will discuss both inventions and their effects.
As a human being inventions have become necessity for entire humanity. In 17th century man discovered wheel, which was one of the biggest achievement in human history. This invention has made humen hefty, evolution has change face of the world. Established communication with far away cities, boosted trades and travelles, change economic structures as well as opened new dimenssions. In this era time become power, this step was considered as rudimentory step of humanity. Dawn for inventors to discover uncharted terretories.
Similarly, the internate has another milstone of this unknown terretory, which has set new records in history. However, wheel and internate we can not compare. Internate opens up doors of vast knowledge, which plays a vital role nowadays. People able to connect with the family, society. It brings not only happiness but also the importance of education in society. Revamping economical and social status of humans. Internate widely spread over the globe just because of it overwhelming capabilities, which helps humans to enable not only system but also diverse culture strengths.
In conclusion, it is really difficult to choose between the wheel and internet, which are playing a vital role in today's life, without anyone of it human will get stuck. So according to me it has equal contribution in the development of humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33466135458 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90252647293 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6018366267 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3888888889 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16992600092 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477250600799 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348158475718 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927798722816 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280248813151 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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