Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
Relationships are what we keep for our future, if you have a good relationship with a friend, family or neighbor that is what you will remain for you at the end of your life, personally, I believe that honesty is an important factor to make a healthy and strong relationships, I feel this way for two reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, honesty will lead to increase the trust between people and make their relations stronger, when people be honest this will make life better and make everyone feel satisfaction, in addition to, people will respect each other, will make a lot of friendships, beside, you can find someone who you can feel free to tell him your secrets without any doubts, my personal experience is a compelling example of this, before 5 years ago, I was in a volunteering program and there was a game that everyone would talk about his own characteristics that he don’t like in himself, when the first one start talking about himself and he was so honest with us, I felt that I respect that guy and the others too started to admire about his honesty without being worry, and that encouraged me to feel free to talk about Characteristics that I don’t like in myself after that we became close friends and we are meeting each other every month.
Secondly, telling the truth has an ethical meaning and impact and make you as an ethical role model for your children, when children see their fathers and their family in general have this merit, they will be like them and that will produce physiologically healthy generation who don’t need to feel doubt of anyone and have a good relations with others, as an example, when I was 8 I found my father has a strong relation with his friend and when I asked him what is the main thing that make your friendship strong till now, he said that we had been honest with each other and that made us feel relief and be a good friends until now, so, i have been grown up with this meaning of honesty this meaning that I learned from my father.
In conclusion, I agree that telling the truth is important in relationships between people this is because this will increase trust between people, and it has an ethical impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in general, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.664160401 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56561312628 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 20.1344086022 492% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 304.330001807 48.9658058833 622% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 465.25 100.406767564 463% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.75 20.6045352989 484% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 5.45110844103 500% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169432648489 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139856635489 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736857314703 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139856635489 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736857314703 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.4 11.7677419355 428% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 58.1214874552 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.5 10.1575268817 389% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 10.0537634409 414% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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