the two maps bellow show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The information that is showed by the maps are about the access of road to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Overall, base on the pictures there were several change of the both between on the 2007 and 2010, where the main transformations were the form of street as well as position of the facilities.
On the first map, the city hospital in 2007 has a ring road, it was seen that there were car park, staff and public which on the both side of streets that was structured regularly, then in the eastern of city hospital there was a bus stop, while that the intersection in the southern of hospital road with the city road of the street which transverse.
On the other picture, in 2010 the city hospital experienced a convert where the there were two roundabouts on the northern and southern side of hospital road. The public car park put on the right side of city hospital then the way to the bus station connected with the two of roundabouts. Finally, the place of ring road and city road were similar in 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun change seems to be countable; consider using: 'several changes'.
Suggestion: several changes
...verall, base on the pictures there were several change of the both between on the 2007 and 201...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43617021277 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45020000847 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457446808511 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4514909895 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.0 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484514346024 0.215688989381 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283491533269 0.103423049105 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189513316292 0.0843802449381 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341132028241 0.15604864568 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455530938876 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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