Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is thought by many people that a person should have inherent skills in order to get success in sports, while others disapprove of this statement and argue that any individual with perseverance and diligence can be an expert player. However, i carry the later notion for numerous reasons.
To embark upon, the people who hold the belief that natural inclinations are mandatory to become a well-known sportsperson because there have been myriads of people who became an overnight sensation for their special qualities at a certain sport, Whereas there are many who could not attain a flourishing career in sports even after several trainings and consistent endeavours. To cite an example, in a basketball game, a player has to be taller, and that is something that can not be accomplished by any mode or hard work.
On the flip-side, undoubtedly, when people support the fact that energy and hands-on experience can make an individual victorious at any sports, it is true for some games as without acting hard and polishing the existing expertise, no one can climb a ladder of prosperity in any realm. We have testified a number of players who succeeded in sports with their tough spirit and constant practice, and this is the prime reason why parents these days encourage their children to engage in sports events from a very young age. For instance, extracurricular activities are being promoted at school and have become a significant part of studies.
In conclusion, while it is valid that victors are born with a distinguished talent, extra drills and discipline make an individual great athlete. Not only this but also invigorate many others to work hard and advance their skills.
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- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher others think that it depends on the attitude of the students Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gence can be an expert player. However, i carry the later notion for numerous rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09252669039 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80505164617 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2138005439 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18165430266 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714361912723 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424089749312 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107524584075 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024900130132 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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