Some people support the new law against teenagers going out of home after midnight, while others don’t support it. Provide your opinion.
The new law enforced by government restricting youngsters going out of home after midnight is welcomed by some people in society. In my opinion, I completely support this law because this will ensure their safety and will improve their relationship with parents because they will be spending more time with them.
Youngsters staying at home during night is always advisable as there is growing crime rate in all countries in spite of several actions taken by government to bring it lower. There is a high probability that teenagers can be misled by criminals which may lead to some dangerous consequences. For example, many juveniles fall for drugs because of wrong friend circle which is quite possible during night. So, bringing law to avoid such damage to the society is a great move by government.
Another point to consider is that parents are always worried when their teenager children go out specifically during night. Many times, it becomes difficult to deny them. This new law gives parents a sense of relief that the kids stay safely at home and spend time with their parents which improves the understanding between them. Hence, the family bonding increases which has a very positive impact on the kid in the long run and also helps to build a better society which has more family values. This law certainly sends a positive signal not just to this country but also to the rest of the world.
In conclusion, to deal with safety of young kids, improve the family bonding and to reduce the worry of parents, implementing the new law will be very effective and better for the future generation of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lowers', 'lows'?
Suggestion: lowers; lows
...actions taken by government to bring it lower. There is a high probability that teena...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90974729242 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5252236637 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8708021868 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169005984803 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625495736555 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843698510127 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101666215214 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748329919166 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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