All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, battery operated cars are substituting four wheelers that are operated using natural gas (gasoline). I agree to this new age change of using electrics cars as it turns out that there are two major benefits - they are environment friendly and cost effective in many ways.
Electric cars are very popular in use as they are eco-friendly and do not strain natural resources. Electric cars also avoid the combustion of gasoline which release tremendous amounts of harmful chemicals that causes air pollution. Furthermore, these natural gases are required to be transported to the gas station for public availability which eventually adds on to the air pollution by burning more fuel. In a recent survey by environmental studies department at University of Texas, it was observed that the amount of fuel burnt to transport gasoline from its reservoir to the gas station was adding up tremendously to air pollution as much as the usage of people running their cars regularly.
Another benefit of the electric cars is that they are extremely pocket-friendly; these run on lithium ion batteries which are re-chargeable. They are easily chargeable at home or at the mechanic center and the electricity required in order to refill these batteries can be produced using the wind mills, water mills or solar panels. This demand for electricity facilitates the growth for more power-plant stations and therefore becomes economic for people. Moreover, the electric cars are low maintenance as compared to the fuel operated ones and hence, it requires less mechanic visits saving money. A leading newspaper's public poll on the recent demand of electric cars suggested that a fuel run car requires on an average of five visits in a year to the mechanic for the maintenance whereas a battery operated car might require only two visits annually.
To reiterate, I am of the opinion that the prohibition of fuel operated cars over the electric cars is going to be of great benefit. The first reason being that they are environment safe and secondly, in the near future they are going to prove to be highly economical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14409221902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8579157305 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538904899135 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.86230527 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.307692308 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244939968846 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995465186628 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555546947272 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157627873891 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240428354015 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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