A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this on your community . Do you oppose or support the factory .Explain your position.
A community can seem either developed or less developed by what is surrounding it. If a well-known company decides to construct a firm nearby, the demand on this sector will certainly increase and it would be seen as a developed community. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the presence of a factory next to the community.
To begin with, everyone that searches for a place for accommodation will judge the rank of the place by its neighboring sites. If the area has a school, supermarket, and a shopping mall within reach then for sure the place has gained a high ranking judgment, resulting in people populating in the district. Therefore, if a region provides all the necessities of the consumer it would escalate the demand rate. For example, a district that only contains a school won’t be as appealing as a district that has a school and a factory. In addition, the existence of a cooperative will raise employment levels, hence the employees would prefer to locate at close quarters.
On the other hand, the construction of a factory has cons effects the district negatively. The development of an industry will lead to a crowded area that follow congestion. For example, a factory that starts to operate at 7 am on weekdays will cause trafficking at around 7 on the streets beside the firm. Moreover, a factory would disturb the people living nearby by the pollution and noises produced.
In conclusion, the neighborhood of a section reflects the level of this section. The more the region supports, the higher the interest on the district. An industry established around the association would act as a benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95698924731 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98708051739 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4053074071 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997764437102 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362831793248 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610865378885 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665225476449 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064668744095 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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