Many people buy new phones and laptops to keep updated with latest technology. Is it good or bad?
Modern technology is growing tremendously which brings human dreams into reality, thus most of the people are upgrading themselves along with it. While there are some advantages as ease of use and reliability, in my opine the disadvantages cause such as security and financial issues are outweighing it.
To start with, there are several reasons behind updating ourselves with latest electronics gadgets, in which flexibility plays the vital role. To be specific, when the new product is launched in market that has new features added and that brings the eager in person to afford it. Features updated can be easily adapted too due to the change in platform that has been utilized to develop the product. For example: there is a lot of differences between Android and smart phone in terms of security, usage, access and other applications related features. As such, there is categorization in laptops launched with different versions of core processors. Based on the human want and affordability, the products are introduced in market in which the saddest part is that most of the descriptions are still not known for the people who use them.
On the other hand, one of the consumer survey outlined that people's are buying the recently updated laptop and mobile to show off themselves and is similar to addiction. Indeed, most of them will never check on security features and availing most of the applications will ramify the system performances. To explain, one of my friend has the same addiction of buying new phones when launched in market. His family is lower middle class, where he will never think about financial constraint faced in family and often exchange the product in amazon to buy new one, where he will use just for couple of months. Rationale behind this action is not justifiable as need or updating in modern trends, this is just making himself satisfied with his temporary want.
To conclude, I firmly believe that making ourselves updated with technology is important but it should be afforded only when it is needed, researched completely and not necessary to be done continuously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...veral reasons behind updating ourselves with latest electronics gadgets, in which flexibili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07449856734 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73563799514 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5507453126 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21486692703 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702085595525 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494214599873 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111351149653 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558855988416 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.