The following appeared in a memorandum from the manager of KNOW radio station.
"Several factors indicate that KNOW radio can no longer succeed as a rock-and-roll music station. Consider, for example, that the number of people in our listening area over fifty years of age has increased dramatically, while our total number of listeners has declined. Also, music stores in our area report decreased sales of rock-and-roll music. Finally, continuous news stations in neighboring cities have been very successful. We predict that switching KNOW radio from rock-and-roll music to 24-hour news will allow the station to attract older listeners and make KNOW radio more profitable than ever."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
In the context, the manager concludes that if the KNOW radio station turn to a 24 hours radio station then it will able to get attention of more listeners & thus achieve more profit than before. Ddelineated in this straightforward way, the author fails to answer several cardinal questions on which the argument can be judged.He notes that the listeners of over 50 years old increased while the total number of listeners & rock & roll music sales had decreased. Though he has given these evidences to supplmental his logic behind the decision, intensive scrutiny view of that proofs reveals that there are an abundance of loopholes laying into that reasons which made the reasons unwarranted. Hence, the argument can be considered unpersuasive & need more tranchant analysis for evaluating.
Firstly, the author stated that the listeners over fifty years old has increased greatly but the did not provide any specific value for this compare to the total number of people. It might be happened that the compared to the total number of people this increament is not much. So this is a mere assumption without much solid ground. Another thing the cites that the total number of people has curtailed. Again, he did not provide no specific value this. It might be happened that the people before are 100 & now after decreased it become 95. So this may not be a huge decrement. Hence this assumption need to be more specific with some solid number to evaluate the conclusion the author has been made.
Secondly, the author states that the in stores the rock & roll music sales has decreased. This is not partinent issue with the radio profit because it might be happened that people are listening music in radio rather buying it form the stores. This reduce of music sales does not indicate that people has losen interest in rock & roll music. Besides this, the manager wanted to shift this radio station to a news station as the neighboring cities have gotten success in new station. However, the authot here fails to see that it is actually more difficult to be successful in a market where there are some radio station already who are already got attention from the listeners. Do the new news station get the same attention instantly? This question can be answered if we can what isthe prespective the manager has taken to be a unique news station.
Finally, the argument can warranted if we can know the actual percentage of the total number of listeners decreased ; this can be done by conducting a survey. Additionally, hiow many people in the city still have interest in rock & roll music need to be known to make the argument strengthen. Lastly, the manager should give some idea of what is the action of plan to be unique news station among the lot of successful news staion. This is really cardinal to achieve the success in the news station industry.
In summary, the author argument is unwarranted as it fails to provide answers of certain assumptions. To buttress it further, the auhtor must provide some concrete evidence, perhaps by conducting a survey among the city residents to know how many people still have interest in rock & roll music.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 537 350
No. of Characters: 2552 1500
No. of Different Words: 234 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.814 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.752 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.429 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.48 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.538 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.72 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... context, the manager concludes that if the KNOW radio station turn to a 24 hours radio ...
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...ons on which the argument can be judged.He notes that the listeners of over 50 ye...
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...the argument can be judged.He notes that the listeners of over 50 years old incre...
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...music sales had decreased. Though he has given these evidences to supplmental h...
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...ad decreased. Though he has given these evidences to supplmental his logic beh...
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...ese evidences to supplmental his logic behind the decision, intensive scrutiny ...
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...ich made the reasons unwarranted. Hence, the argument can be considered unpersuas...
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...ght be happened that the compared to the total number of people this increament i...
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...provide no specific value this. It might be happened that the people before are 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, another thing, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 55.5748502994 115% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 16.3942115768 152% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2633.0 2260.96107784 116% => OK
No of words: 536.0 441.139720559 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91231343284 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54464161101 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 204.123752495 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455223880597 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5565572759 57.8364921388 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.32 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.44 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273972872751 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790522171057 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594302947883 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161992130865 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746921621679 0.0628817314937 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 12.3882235529 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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