the changes of two maps
The two maps illustrate the significantly changes at a region experimented over two decades from 1995 to now.
It is clear that there is a tourism development in this area by the buildings and changes of accommodations and activities on the sea.
As can been seen, at the bottom of the two map, there is a sea where could catch fishes in the morning in 1995 by boats but it now has been replaced by a lot of yachts. Entering to the coastal land, there was a fish market that has been demolished to make way for many apartments and there was a café that has not changed except expanding the road that enters the fish market to get into it. Going deep towards the mainland, at the left-hand of the map, there were housings and sport houses but currently they were converted into numerous housings (with 6 housings added) and three restaurants respectedly as well as at the right-hand of the map there were a large land where used to construct a public park and hotels. Over the long time holiday homes have been erected in place of the park and the hotels has been extended and in particularly there has been a building of a new parking lot.
At the other view, on the top right-hand corner of the map, a foretime farmland has been transformed into two sporty courses are tennis and golf.
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- task2 For centuries important parts of education have remained such as writing reading maths With the advent of computers some people think that computer skill is made as a forth subject to be added in school To what extend do you agree or disagree 73
- For centuries important parts of education have remained such as reading writing and Math With the advent of computers some people think that computer skills be made as fourth skill to the list To what extent do you agree 95
- the changes of two maps 73
- Task 2 Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers Employers organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent What are your views 81
- For centuries important parts of education have remained such as reading writing and Math With the advent of computers some people think that computer skills be made as fourth skill to the list To what extent do you agree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...dations and activities on the sea. As can been seen, at the bottom of the two map, the...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sporty courses are tennis and golf.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51271186441 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54122502336 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550847457627 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0047211252 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.142857143 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7142857143 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291326924752 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146497594569 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137139900818 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220651259183 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137638810169 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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