Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or is it the responsibility of producers, discuss.
The topic of over packed products has become a heated debate among societies. Although many people assert that it is consumers responsibility to avoid buying over packed products, others refute this proposition saying that it comes directly under manufacturer responsibility to avoid such things. This essay will discuss why manufacturers should avoid over packing of products and reach a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of arguments which found that why producers should avoid over packing of things in which the most preponderant one is over cast to the consumers. people have to pay extra for over packed products thereby effecting their budgets. For instance, a study proved that about 80% of the general population is effected with over packed products. Thus, over packing is directly responsible for the inflation in market.
Another pivotal aspect would be that over packing waste is non-biodegradable seriously harming our enviroment. Most of the pollution in world is due to the boxes and cartoons wasted in bins after using products. For example, a survey revealed that worlds temperature has rised about 4 degrees during the previous decades due to waste pollution. Henece, over packing is also serious cause of pollution issues.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the detriments of over packing in terms of enviromental problems and increased cast to customers. Therefore, in my opinion, governments should take serious action against manufacturers to prevent this harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91804435413 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1317357339 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5384615385 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353297447296 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13061236873 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860265932909 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212671447872 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121221261037 0.0609392437508 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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