The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts demonstrate the average percentages of three neutrients in typical meals consumed in USA.
Looking at the chart for sodium consumption, dinner contains the most percentage of sodium, 43%. Lunch contains the second most proportion of sodium. Breakfast and snacks have equal percentage of sodium, 14% each.
Like sodium, saturated fat is also consumed the most in dinner, 37%. Lunch also consists of a significant portion of saturated fat, 26%. Snack also contains a substantial amount of it. Breakfast has the least percentage of saturated fat.
From the chart for added sugar, it is evident that snack contains the most proportion of it, which is 42%. At dinner, added sugar comprises 23% of the meal. The other two, breakfast and lunch, also have substantial amount of added sugar.
Comparing the data presented in three charts, it is clear that sodium and saturated fat are almost uniformly distributed among the meals other than dinner. Whereas added sugar is contained the most in snacks, which is a large percentage.
- Governments should spend money in railways rather than roads. 56
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 56
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 66
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computers is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20118343195 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65898488586 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5130098682 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6153846154 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121561722317 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512760989429 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705669666869 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971059692819 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915590222126 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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