TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
our jobs are one of the most important aspects of our lives, and we spent most of our daily lives doing our so called jobs, doing various things or monotonous tasks. personally, i believe doing distinct types of task are more appealing than doing same thing all day. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
first of all, most people are bored easily and want adventure from life. If our work is doing same thing over and over again, then it makes us stressed, depressed, and even for some case make life meaningless. As a result, it affect our all aspects of lives other than work lives. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. When i was in university, i was one of the most brilliant student. I liked the university environment that everyday was different and every time i met new people. even though my major was physics, i elected many more classes from different disciplines, and i was happy with learning new things from completely different fields. Once i graduated from my university, i hired in an institute as a research assistant. my job was mostly coding, and i felt like i'm not a physicist, but a person who sits in front of computer all day. And also it seemed that my life became miserable, and there was no growth in personal development. Eventually, i was depressed and bored, and found no meaning from life. then one day, i decided to quite my first job and hired in a company that requires employment to various tasks and projects from day to day. From that moment, i have begun to feel my energy and meaning of life again.
Secondly, even though doing one thing all the time makes you become a master of it, it won't make you successful as a person. Human beings are complex animals thanks to their intelligent, and because of these complexity, people need different and ever-changing experiences to make growth in their personality. To be more specific, i have two uncles and both of them are complete opposite of each other for their live attitude. one of those uncles has a job of just doing single thing all day, a security guard, and other uncle works as a journalist. my security guard uncle is one of the most boring and outdated person i've ever met. He is easily angered and has really depressed personality. On other hand, because of ever demanding of knowing many things and requiring different everyday activity and travelling various destination, my journalist uncle has a brilliant person who enjoy doing various things and thinks life as the most wonderful thing.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that most people are satisfied doing different things throughout their working hours. this is because people are bored easily and doing one thing may hinder one's personal growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61753407604 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490683229814 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8266996411 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.56 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180257464309 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053033288876 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672040676438 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124805832194 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372250054874 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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