Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people are migrating to other countries within these years, which can lead to problems if they’re not familiar with the different languages they have to speak, therefore my answer is yes.

English is one of the most dominant languages, though there are still various countries who have their own, such as the Europeans. Before going overseas, surely you’ll have to learn a different language, which some might find difficulty during the process. The words may differ a lot- for example, the gender of an item, which you have to figure out when taking a German course. Being paired up with your classmates for an assignment your teacher provided, however, you might not be able to express your mind, or simply trying to make out the words you’re trying to form, which can result in being unable to fit in the crowd and become isolated -based on the differences.

Subsequently, this may affect your daily lives as well. If you’re disoriented, you’ll ask a stranger passing by, but you might not know what instructions to ask. When heading to a hospital for medical treatment, or even a restaurant, might be a challenge for them and are instead forced to use hand gestures, like pointing at a specific item, failing after a plethora of attempts.

To conclude, residing in a foreign place would bring numerous problems, for example having to adapt to a whole new environment, a narrow range of vocabularies when communicating and also might not be able to fulfill your needs, thus I believe is a major issue that we should put more focus and effort on.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95895522388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74281905345 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8406449538 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197979548806 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798552206662 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411125675257 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109239317253 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262005789073 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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