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When it ccomes to the question that whether young idividuals are reliable on their parents less than past, it brings up a doubt because opinions vary from person yo person. Some hold the opinion that children todays can make their decisions by their own. But others hold the opinion that young people now are so dependent on their parents in order to make decisions. Personaly, I think young people are capable to make their own lived decisions. I feel this way for two major reason. I will ecplicate my reasons behind this statement through the following essay.
The first reason that immediately comes into mind is that today's children have oppurtuinty to use advenced technology like internet and social meda to get their required informations at any curcomtence. Nowadays young generation can gain information for example about their desire jobs in future by serach then on internet and they have the chance to know about pros and cons of thais specific job without experience them.
The second reason makes me hold this belief is that young people nowadays become independent from their parents ealier. To be more specific, it helps young people to be independent ealier that makes their personality more reliable on their own that on others. Indeed, by this they gain an ability to how to make their decisions, how to do their works independently. For instance most of the young people today leave their home and parents in ealier ages to attend universities. So they are alone in this pass and comple to attempt to solve their problems individually.
Two wrap it up, if we take a glance into young people lives nowadays, it will be soon recognized that they are able to undertake their works and make their decisions about their lives. This is because they can utilize advanced technology to acquir information in any field they want and because they become independent ealier than past that cause them to stand on their own foots ealier so that they are able to make good decisionsaboyt their lives. j
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: J
... make good decisionsaboyt their lives. j
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53113879287 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6857112964 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897262194215 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481492168351 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805690727889 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603889937087 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605629927096 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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