Does the design of a building affects life and work of an individual positively or negatively?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals design of building has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain its effect on lives of people and their work. Regarding this, I would say it effect individual’s life positively.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance has to do with the fact that proper architectural design provides good ventilation system, which ultimately improves the mental power of an individual. This is because fresh air improves blood circulation and capability. As a result, it improves their working efficiency. To put this into perspective, it is generally being seen that company with good building design have better work oriented force.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that good design of furniture provides good impression in customer’s mind. Due to this, it eventually raises the company’s overall revenue growth. As a case in point, good infrastructure of google has raised its overall economy.
Hence, based on the arguments above, we can conclude that design of the building not only increases the revenue of a particular company but also provides a good first impression to an individual who went to see the company. Therefore, I believe that running institution should put more emphasis on infrastructure in order to achieve their desired goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3640167364 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10605701867 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.615506329 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6153846154 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174453930861 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560018385925 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533486496005 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09803934873 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043257407132 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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