Although you have more interest in computers, you are not able to get enrolled in a computing and statistics course as an elementary course is mandatory for enrollment. Write a letter to the enrollment officer
-describe why you are writing
-explain your circumstances
-ask him to provide enrollment without the elementary course
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest on a course offered by your institution. I read about the course on a pamphlet issued by your start for which a basic course's completion certificate is mandatory.
I have not completed any course about computing till now. But I would like to gain knowledge about computing and statistics. Though i did not finish an elementary course, I have many certificates which i have obtained in my lower classes and these certificates vindicate my knowledge in computing.
Despite i studied in a remote village in my home country, I have acquired much information about computers both in theoretical as well as in practical aspects. I very well know that an elementary course outweighs the certificates and knowledge i have gained. The course offered by your organisation may seek a job for me in my future.
Would you please exempt me from completing a preliminary course? Perhaps, this will fetch me an admission for the computer class. If you offer me an enrollment for the course, it would be of great help to improve my career.
Looking forward to accept my excuse. Thank you for the consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Gayathri Mohandas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...completion certificate is mandatory. I have not completed any course about com...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... about computing and statistics. Though i did not finish an elementary course, I ...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e my knowledge in computing. Despite i studied in a remote village in my home ...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ion about computers both in theoretical as well as in practical aspects. I very well know ...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to accepting'.
Suggestion: to accepting
...to improve my career. Looking forward to accept my excuse. Thank you for the considerat...
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Line 11, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xcuse. Thank you for the consideration. Yours faithfully, Gayathri Mohandas.
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Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... consideration. Yours faithfully, Gayathri Mohandas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02323862487 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8433311077 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7857142857 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284669203726 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102354128266 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575189247921 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158504897934 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440586414477 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.