You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during holidays. You decide to apply for the job.Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,*Introduce yourself*Explain what experience and

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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during holidays. You decide to apply for the job.

Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,

*Introduce yourself

*Explain what experience and special skills you have

*Explain why you are interested in the job

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to the advertisement in a newspaper regarding the job vacancy available in your Museum. I would like to express my anxiety in working for the betterment of your shop.

I am a permanent resident in New York for the past two years and I do reside in an apartment called the Golden Maple which is near your Museum. Currently, I am working as a cashier in a coffee shop near the Berkeley University.

Being a citizen of the United Kingdom, I worked in London museum for a short period of six months. As a result, I have gained a little experience in handling and preserving the portraits and the other objects of a Museum. In addition, I myself is an artist and have sold portraits for a small fee.

Would you kindly offer me the job? If you accept my request, it would be a great help for me to improve my career as I am planning to pursue a doctorate in History in my future. I hope you will consider my request. In case I am given an appointment order for the job, I would strive to the core and work to your entire satisfaction. If you have any suspicion about the verity of my declaration, I will, on further request attach the work experience certificates i have obtained in my previous workplaces which perhaps vindicate my experience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Gayathri Mohandas.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ing for the betterment of your shop. I am a permanent resident in New York fo...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for the betterment of your shop. I am a permanent resident in New York for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you. Yours faithfully, Gayathri Mohandas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44859813084 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68012551151 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57476635514 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1057094883 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2307692308 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33122855897 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110868297954 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045209212666 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139515794119 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823527322853 0.0580467560999 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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