Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other thing in life can make people happy?
Since of inception of life, humans have been struggling to find ways to be content. Some people are of an opinion that having plenty of money will directly contribute to happiness in life. This essay will outline why having money will secure happiness and what other thing can assist happiness in life.
Nowadays, every essential segment of life is directly connected with money. No matter where we go, having adequate money provides a sense of relief and security. Every essential commodity comes with its price tag, which is difficult to replace without money. For example, a survey conducted in London magazine on girls concluded that 70 percent of their happiness comes after shopping as it uplifts their mood. For that reason, it is quite evident that money secures happiness in life.
Secondly becoming happy is a variable factor that depends on plenty of other things, including spending time with loved ones. Being together with family and friends provides a sense of relief, decreases fatigue, and ultimately the level of happiness rises. For example, a survey conducted on people’s living preferences in the Economist magazine concluded 80 percent are favor of living with family. Being together with people strengthens the bonding of affection which is an integral factor in happiness.
The essay discussed how having adequate money helps in making life easier and improves the level of happiness. However, for complete happiness, affection and having company of friends and family is needed as well as they are the ones who provide support for every unfortunate situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30588235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5577707999 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.232093769 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398451105849 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138581670235 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106098421975 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235507954325 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135148854463 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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