Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. • automobiles • bicycles • airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Transportation is always an essential part of human life. if I really had to choose from these options, I would definitely prefer the airplanes. I feel this way for the main two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, the advent of airplane enables us to travel much distant with ease. In the past, our ancestors had not clear imaginations of other countries’ appearances, while today we can travel around the world as much as we want even if it is Antarctica. According to our national history, the Chinggis Khan could not solve the problem of how across the seas, so he was not able to conquer countries which surround by oceans. Even if he defeated half of the world, the sea was the main reason he could not be the king of the whole world. Nonetheless, our modern world, we travel freely around all countries even if it is located in the seas such as Japan and Korea.
On top this, invention of plane improve our diplomatic communication which allows us to develop our countries in some many ways such as economy and reputation. Drawing from my own country’s example, every year thousands of tourists visit in Mongolia and contribute a great number of dollars into our economy. It helps us to improve our infrastructure and buildings in particular residents’ lives. it goes without saying that it is also a great opportunity to show our country’s beautiful heritage and share our exceptional histories with them.
Thirdly, this great discovery provides thousands of students to study abroad and without any difficulties to arrive in their home country to meet their beloved ones. I admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. While I was studying in Russia, I had no obstacles to arrive at my home and go back to my university during school vacations. Studying alone in another country is a great challenge for everyone because they feel homesick a lot. However, thanks to the airplane, they do not need to suffer from this for a long time.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that airplane is the transportation that has greatly altered people’s life. This is because it gives people the chances to discover other countries and improve their host's living conditions and study abroad with more ease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nonetheless, really, so, third, thirdly, while, i feel, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9058524173 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90174975417 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562340966921 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7490409202 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.473684211 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683594341398 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257498373819 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361369110299 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047606711958 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359953409822 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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